Sunday, May 22, 2016

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this is is the book im reading sorry that the picture isnt good but the book is called hating alison and ashley we read 2 chapters and 2 chapters is 9 pages we got lucky this time the book is about 2 girls alison and ashley i dont really no what the book is about because i have only read 9 pages but youwill no more in 2 weeks
 this is my second writers notbook you cant really see it but i will say what its like we had to be like a ant we have to pretend that we look under something i picked the laptop there is a photo but you cant see it it has 8 bolts and a name and holders
yea the photos arnt the best but this is my workshop task i will type in what it says the main point in the story iwas about abeing a coward and how bealiving in your rights.and being tied up and if that didnt work you were sent to more and more camps for eighty four days untill he was wanting to go to war
this is my first writers notebook task you had to stop your pearnts from waking you up what i did was i had a meatel box with a bolt in the middel for the string you tie the string to the 2 bukets and pour anything you like (in the bukets) then you put it up on the door fram and tie string to the nob and when they open it the food or stuff falls on them

1 comment:

  1. Well done Holly! I can see that you are trying really hard to be reflective on your learning. I wouldn't want to be your parents getting soaked with the buckets!! Next blog post, I would like to see you making sure that you are proofreading and editing your writing. Are you showing your knowledge of being able to use simple, compound and complex sentences? I would love to see proof of this by you using your correct capital letters and full stops. Keep up the great work!

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